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August 5, 2005, 6:09 am

sat on that fence long enoughfor a splinter to enter her pillow cushioned asslong enoughfor her feet to missthe plush touchof thick green grassthat grew exclusively to pamper her like a princesssat on...

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August 5, 2005, 8:48 am

Oh Ma...there is something so deeply real in how you pen things...I find myself nodding a yes...YES M'am...

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August 5, 2005, 2:20 pm

Hey Ma...different for sure! I like the attitude that comes through in this and the way that time humbles her and gives her a good dose of reality. The passage with the wind was a little crude but it...

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August 6, 2005, 6:37 pm

tyvm "fuck the_game. for real. and you can tell him i said it. ~ John Shaft - Super Genius

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August 6, 2005, 9:20 pm

Ma, I like the folksy humour, the realism, the lightness of touch, economy of means. Enjoyed it very much. Davie

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August 7, 2005, 4:23 pm

You write with attitude - I really like that - good stuff, more please.Dinah

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August 7, 2005, 10:37 pm

Ma pondering the intricacies of life, I think I have a few of those splinters!!!"long enough for her to make a fat wish on each star that made up the lil dip& all the others held withinspace's...

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August 8, 2005, 5:39 am

Very realistic writing.Bare yet held in check.Lovely piece!And oh yes,Welcome to the Maelstrom!Yours with love,Alex

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August 9, 2005, 11:59 am

Great rhythm & pace, tightly controlled piece with a real strong message...well done!(P.S. any chance of toning down that sig a little bit? We've got some younger readers on the site...nothing...

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